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#WritersCoffeeClub 9th Jan 2026. What's your top tip for writing authentic dialogue?

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    @cstross Speak to the ducks.Get all your ducks in a row.Hey presto - no more plot holes!
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    @aadeacon Exactly. Humans in our timeline *needed* mechanisms to ignite things.In an alternate timeline, (half of) humans can make all the sparks they want without any tools or materials. Why *bother* with semi-reliable flintlocks or matchlocks? What's even the motivation?
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    #writerscoffeeclub 6 Process-wise, what’s improved for you over the years?When I started selling short fic in the mid 1980s everything happened on paper, via snail mail, and photocopying was expensive. By the time I was selling books in the 00s I could talk to my agent by email … but manuscripts and proofs still had to go via international air mail.Some time around 2010 it all flipped and now the main nuisance is publishers want Microsoft and Adobe files (see also: enshittification).
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    @SteveClough @cstross I write nothing more creative than documentation for the software I produce, but people misunderstand that, too.The experience of people misunderstanding my docs, or simply failing to read them, was one of the things that turned me away from evangelicalism. (I bet you didn't see that coming.) I wasn't using parables to hint at ineffable spiritual truths in the face of religious persecution: I was just explaining how software worked, how to see its current state, and how to configure and maintain systems. People who were paid to read and understand this material would not or could not do so: their repeated questions made it obvious. Within a very few years, instead of reading TFM, people developed folk stories of commands they could type that usually did something that could be mistaken for success. They veered constantly off-course, and I kept having to drag them back. They consulted each other, rather than the docs, and developed their own mythology about how the software worked. They intuitively felt they knew the software better than I did, because my approach to problem-solving was careful and methodical but they knew a golden shortcut.If concrete, human-level explanations, written out literally, landed so badly, there's no chance that people will have remembered the figurative and unfathomable teachings of Jesus seventy years after his death, written them down accurately and fully, and built from them a useful picture of worlds seen and unseen and the will of God. I'm sorry; it just doesn't ring true.