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#WritersCoffeeClub Day 23: Will you have any profanity in your work?
* Travis Winter will swear vociferously when things are going wrong
* Donna Kuang probably uses lots of casual profanity behind close doors/with close confidants — in contrast to a much cleaner public image
* I feel like Jessie, David, and Ángel may use some for emphasis at timesAlso, I'm a fan of the Precision F-Strike (https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/PrecisionFStrike) and will doubtless find places to deploy a few.
More on the likely places for Precision F-Strikes: Margot and Carlos both have small children, and so have trained themselves out of using profanity. (Indeed, I'm not sure Carlos was ever a fan, but I think Margot was in her younger days.) I can definitely see Margot carefully and deliberately deploying just 1 or 2 very momentous F-bombs in the places where they'll do the most good.
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More on the likely places for Precision F-Strikes: Margot and Carlos both have small children, and so have trained themselves out of using profanity. (Indeed, I'm not sure Carlos was ever a fan, but I think Margot was in her younger days.) I can definitely see Margot carefully and deliberately deploying just 1 or 2 very momentous F-bombs in the places where they'll do the most good.
#WritersCoffeeClub Day 24: What's the best time of day for you to write?
Seems to be evening. I'll admit, I've rarely even tried writing in the morning; I'm usually not nearly awake enough for it then. Afternoons, I've tried sometimes on weekends, but I really do get going better once it gets dark outside.
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#WritersCoffeeClub Day 24: What's the best time of day for you to write?
Seems to be evening. I'll admit, I've rarely even tried writing in the morning; I'm usually not nearly awake enough for it then. Afternoons, I've tried sometimes on weekends, but I really do get going better once it gets dark outside.
#WritersCoffeeClub Day 25: What's a better (more truthful) name for a famous novel?
Honestly, I've got to throw my lot in with @elysegrasso's "I have enough trouble finding names for my own novels." My WIP has a working title that I *know* won't be the actual title, and while I'm willing to put in the hard work on all the plotting, characterization, and world-building, when it comes to a title, I'm still praying that inspiration will somehow strike before I'm done.
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#WritersCoffeeClub Day 25: What's a better (more truthful) name for a famous novel?
Honestly, I've got to throw my lot in with @elysegrasso's "I have enough trouble finding names for my own novels." My WIP has a working title that I *know* won't be the actual title, and while I'm willing to put in the hard work on all the plotting, characterization, and world-building, when it comes to a title, I'm still praying that inspiration will somehow strike before I'm done.
#WritersCoffeeClub Day 26: Have you ever retconned a story post-publishing? Is it OK to retcon?
I *HATE* retcons because "I take it back, that never happened" *nullifies stories* (or parts thereof). If you, the author, aren't willing to let your story stand, to say "yes, that happened" — in short, to *take your story seriously* — then why should the reader?
But I do like when the events don't change, but our interpretation of them does. I don't consider that a "retcon", but a reinterpretation.
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#WritersCoffeeClub Day 26: Have you ever retconned a story post-publishing? Is it OK to retcon?
I *HATE* retcons because "I take it back, that never happened" *nullifies stories* (or parts thereof). If you, the author, aren't willing to let your story stand, to say "yes, that happened" — in short, to *take your story seriously* — then why should the reader?
But I do like when the events don't change, but our interpretation of them does. I don't consider that a "retcon", but a reinterpretation.
#WritersCoffeeClub Day 27: Use of AI in writing?
First off, that should be LLMs, not "AI". There's no intelligence there; I don't want to help the hype merchants.
In my own writing? I'm very against it. On the one hand, I want to write. I don't want to have something else do the writing for me. And on the other hand, the question of what incorporating LLM output into my work would mean for my copyrights is one with no clear answer, and many bad possibilities.
Others' writing is up to them.
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#WritersCoffeeClub Day 27: Use of AI in writing?
First off, that should be LLMs, not "AI". There's no intelligence there; I don't want to help the hype merchants.
In my own writing? I'm very against it. On the one hand, I want to write. I don't want to have something else do the writing for me. And on the other hand, the question of what incorporating LLM output into my work would mean for my copyrights is one with no clear answer, and many bad possibilities.
Others' writing is up to them.
#WritersCoffeeClub Day 28: How do you approach a fight scene or other high-action scenes?
I'm planning to write close 3rd person, so it will depend a lot on whose viewpoint we're in. Either of my martial artist characters, for example, will describe things in more detail, sometimes using specific terms for particular types of attacks and blocks. Other folks with less combat experience would have a much more chaotic impression of a fight, and that'll be reflected in the narration.
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#WritersCoffeeClub Day 28: How do you approach a fight scene or other high-action scenes?
I'm planning to write close 3rd person, so it will depend a lot on whose viewpoint we're in. Either of my martial artist characters, for example, will describe things in more detail, sometimes using specific terms for particular types of attacks and blocks. Other folks with less combat experience would have a much more chaotic impression of a fight, and that'll be reflected in the narration.
#WritersCoffeeClub Day 29: Some writers hate exclamation marks! How do you feel about them? What about interrobangs!?
I absolutely hate exclamation points in narration. Even when I was a pimply-faced teen with bad enough taste to read Piers Anthony, I still (or already) squirmed and cringed at his use of them.
But they're totally fine in dialogue — at least, assuming a character is shouting, or excited, or whatever. Keep 'em between the quotation marks!
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#WritersCoffeeClub Day 29: Some writers hate exclamation marks! How do you feel about them? What about interrobangs!?
I absolutely hate exclamation points in narration. Even when I was a pimply-faced teen with bad enough taste to read Piers Anthony, I still (or already) squirmed and cringed at his use of them.
But they're totally fine in dialogue — at least, assuming a character is shouting, or excited, or whatever. Keep 'em between the quotation marks!
#WritersCoffeeClub Day 30: How much detail do you put into character descriptions?
Enough to give the reader an idea of what they look like (hopefully including what race they are, like The Hunger Games' Rue), but not a lot beyond that; I go more for quick thumbnail and vibes than detailed portraiture... except for items the character chooses to express themself. Buttons, pins, statement/graphic tees, those all deliver messages. (And in Ángel's fashionista case, their whole wardrobe qualifies.)
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#WritersCoffeeClub Day 30: How much detail do you put into character descriptions?
Enough to give the reader an idea of what they look like (hopefully including what race they are, like The Hunger Games' Rue), but not a lot beyond that; I go more for quick thumbnail and vibes than detailed portraiture... except for items the character chooses to express themself. Buttons, pins, statement/graphic tees, those all deliver messages. (And in Ángel's fashionista case, their whole wardrobe qualifies.)
#WritersCoffeeClub Day 1: Does your work include any poetry? Share a snippet.
Some might pop up during the writing. I don't have any specific plans for it, but I can imagine a few places it might crop up.
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#WritersCoffeeClub Day 1: Does your work include any poetry? Share a snippet.
Some might pop up during the writing. I don't have any specific plans for it, but I can imagine a few places it might crop up.
#WritersCoffeeClub Day 2: Do you use ARC readers? Do they help your book sales? What's an ARC reader?
I'm not at that point yet. I haven't even really thought about it.
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#WritersCoffeeClub Day 2: Do you use ARC readers? Do they help your book sales? What's an ARC reader?
I'm not at that point yet. I haven't even really thought about it.
#WritersCoffeeClub Day 3: What writing advice would you give your younger self?
Maybe to start writing sooner? But maybe not; maybe I started now because now is when I finally have something I want to write.
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#WritersCoffeeClub Day 3: What writing advice would you give your younger self?
Maybe to start writing sooner? But maybe not; maybe I started now because now is when I finally have something I want to write.
#WritersCoffeeClub Day 4: Do you/will you write under your own name? Do you share a name with another writer?
Yes, I'll be writing under my own name. And no, I don't share it with anyone else; I'm quite sure there is nobody else in the world with my name.
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#WritersCoffeeClub Day 4: Do you/will you write under your own name? Do you share a name with another writer?
Yes, I'll be writing under my own name. And no, I don't share it with anyone else; I'm quite sure there is nobody else in the world with my name.
#WritersCoffeeClub Day 5: What genre is your WIP?
Urban fantasy.
(Technically I suppose I could or should specify _modern_ urban fantasy, since urban fantasy can be set in earlier eras.)
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#WritersCoffeeClub Day 5: What genre is your WIP?
Urban fantasy.
(Technically I suppose I could or should specify _modern_ urban fantasy, since urban fantasy can be set in earlier eras.)
#WritersCoffeeClub Day 6: Is it the reader's/critic's interpretation of a work or the author's? Would you fight an author's opinion?
I'm of two minds (or maybe more) on the Death of the Author. A few thoughts: 🧵 1/5
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#WritersCoffeeClub Day 6: Is it the reader's/critic's interpretation of a work or the author's? Would you fight an author's opinion?
I'm of two minds (or maybe more) on the Death of the Author. A few thoughts: 🧵 1/5
* A work needs to, or at least really *should*, be able to stand on its own. It shouldn't need some external "artist's statement" to make it comprehensible. (For example, Félix González-Torres' "Untitled (Portrait of Ross in L.A.)" seems to be nothing but a pile of candy unless and until you hear about how it represents his partner, who was dying of AIDS at the time the artwork debuted. Knowing that, it becomes powerful and painful, but without it? It's practically meaningless.) 2/5
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* A work needs to, or at least really *should*, be able to stand on its own. It shouldn't need some external "artist's statement" to make it comprehensible. (For example, Félix González-Torres' "Untitled (Portrait of Ross in L.A.)" seems to be nothing but a pile of candy unless and until you hear about how it represents his partner, who was dying of AIDS at the time the artwork debuted. Knowing that, it becomes powerful and painful, but without it? It's practically meaningless.) 2/5
* OTOH, context is important and can add a lot. Picasso's "Guernica", on its own, is obviously a representation of something very chaotic and traumatic, and that's clear without any outside knowledge. But knowing that it depicts an actual bombing of an actual town gives it greater weight. 3/5
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* OTOH, context is important and can add a lot. Picasso's "Guernica", on its own, is obviously a representation of something very chaotic and traumatic, and that's clear without any outside knowledge. But knowing that it depicts an actual bombing of an actual town gives it greater weight. 3/5
* What an author was trying to say, what they "meant", is important. If an author says "Look, my work was really intended to do/say X, that's what I was going for the whole time", I usually take that pretty seriously.
* OTOH, if nobody got that, then the author kind of failed. I mean, an artist or author's job is to *communicate something*. If a few people miss it, that's par for the course, but if most of them do? Then the artist's attempt to communicate was a failure. 4/5
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* What an author was trying to say, what they "meant", is important. If an author says "Look, my work was really intended to do/say X, that's what I was going for the whole time", I usually take that pretty seriously.
* OTOH, if nobody got that, then the author kind of failed. I mean, an artist or author's job is to *communicate something*. If a few people miss it, that's par for the course, but if most of them do? Then the artist's attempt to communicate was a failure. 4/5
* Buuuuuttt... sometimes artists just plain *deceive themselves*. Sometimes someone'll write something, and claim until they're blue in the face that "Really, it's about X! It's not Y, I promise!", and the rest of us can all see, "Sorry, pal, but it's obviously actually Y."
I haven't got any examples at hand right now, though, and I think that's fairly rare. 5/5
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* Buuuuuttt... sometimes artists just plain *deceive themselves*. Sometimes someone'll write something, and claim until they're blue in the face that "Really, it's about X! It's not Y, I promise!", and the rest of us can all see, "Sorry, pal, but it's obviously actually Y."
I haven't got any examples at hand right now, though, and I think that's fairly rare. 5/5
#WritersCoffeeClub Day 7: What's your favourite book? Why?
I couldn't possibly pick just one. A few that come to mind as "ones I've loved", though, include:
* The Dark is Rising, by Susan Cooper
* Earth, by David Brin
* The Last Hot Time, by John M. FordI feel like I'm missing something here, and it'll hit me two weeks from now and I'll wonder how I could possibly have left it out.
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#WritersCoffeeClub Day 7: What's your favourite book? Why?
I couldn't possibly pick just one. A few that come to mind as "ones I've loved", though, include:
* The Dark is Rising, by Susan Cooper
* Earth, by David Brin
* The Last Hot Time, by John M. FordI feel like I'm missing something here, and it'll hit me two weeks from now and I'll wonder how I could possibly have left it out.
#WritersCoffeeClub Day 8: Do you write in the active voice, passive voice or a mixture? Does it matter?
I think passive voice would be a really weird choice for a novel. It's great for scientific papers and other academic work, but it has fairly limited use in fiction. (An exception that comes to mind is Kafka's use of the passive voice in describing how Gregor Samsa became a cockroach: it serves effectively to obscure the agency behind that, because it's Not The Point of the story.)
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@stefano Where is that hosted?
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Happy Birthday @stefano, thank you for the awesome community building work you keep doing, for all the technical and non technical notes you share, for the inspiration you are and because in a world full of tech bros you keep showing the gentle and smiling side of IT.
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@G3rt e come si fa? 😪
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Allora mi gioco il pezzo forte 😉
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@francina1909 @ClayAdventuresontheShelf domani fotografo i miei, E VEDIAMO CHI VINCE!
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