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    #WritersCoffeeClub – 15 Jan. How human are your protagonists? What about your antagonists?Current WIP(s) are set 700,000 years in our future (it's wide-scale space opera). Our species of hominin is long extinct and our planet forgotten, but its existence is inferred from cladistic studies—humanity speciated after it went interstellar.There's a "Translator's Note" at the beginning—see screencap—that tries to clarify things. (Note that it's as much a work of fiction as the rest of the novel.)
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    #WritersCoffeeClub 25 NovWhat are some tips you can share to avoid 'clunky' phrasing?Everybody's suggesting reading your work aloud, but I disagree: prose fiction should not focus on replicating speech, but on conveying meaning. It's a separate art form from the spoken word and should be treated as such. Splitting long sentences so that they're readable aloud is a shibboleth of modern editorial fashion that focuses on accessibility and market share, meeting the needs of "young adult" readers.
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    @cstross I mean, that's quite obvious: knowing how to do hello world in basic really doesn't qualify you to be a software engineer at Airbus.Boeing on the other hand ...
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    Ooh I thought of another aspect of letters within fiction. A letter or any other text message is unlike dialog in that it persists to be re-read later, maybe not by the intended recipient, and can be loaded with hidden meanings that you wouldn't expect someone to pick up on or remember accurately if they heard the same words spoken.I used this twice in The Silk Mind, in a letter to the Badger Survey from Doctor Grey, and rather pointed diplomatic letters between him and Celandine.