@eishiya You have mentioned a lot of techniques that I can evaluate again. But the big thing is the reminder to consider how to employ colors and shading as part of the storytelling. It’s probably easier to do when I’m considering the whole scene and not an isolated page, too. So again, thank you, I’m pretty sure that the page will be different in the final comic but I think rather than revising it I’ll rethink color design scene by scene.
